Category Archives: Agents

After the first revision – now what?

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The SECOND revision, duh! I just wanted to give you an update on my upcoming novel which we hope will soon be known as the “previously unpublished, now a best-seller” novel.

When I received the first correspondence from my agent, Susan Hawk, I read through the seven pages of revisions she’d suggested and took a deep breath. I was pretty sure I could do it all and in a timely manner. It helped that I agreed with her suggestions and that they hadn’t included anything too extensive like killing off two of the main four characters. Whew. I finished the revisions and sent them back within the three month deadline I’d given myself. I did ASK if she wanted it in a particular timeframe but she’d declined to give me one. So three months it was.

Then – I got a very nice email.

Hi Lisa,

Just wanted to let you know that I finally have responses from all the readers and it’s unanimous – your book is a total joy to read!  Everyone has really enjoyed it.  There are some places that need a little tightening, and some questions that I have for you, but I think you’ve done the major re-work.  So, many thanks for the good, hard work you’ve done so far.  I will have a letter detailing the remaining issues for you by end of next week.

A few days later, I got a second letter. This was different in that Susan had gone through my entire manuscript and made proofreading notes, as well as line edits. Thinks like [tighten] and [this passage is confusing]. So I began my second round of revision. This one took much less time – about three weeks. Again, I agreed with my agent and felt like the changes made the book stronger. Then I emailed it back to her and waited.

Hi Lisa,

Just checking in with you.  I’ve finished your revise and it was a total pleasure to read!  It’s always been that way of course, but testament to your writing the great changes that you’ve made that I find it even more so now.  I do have some line edits, and I’m pulling that together for you, but in the meantime – thank you!

More soon, Susan

Now I’m on revision number three. Because agents/publishers/editors go on vacation during the summer, I’ve got a bit of leeway until I send it back. Our goal is to have it done, polished, perfected, and sent out by September. Which is why this summer will now be known as the “Summer of Constant Prayer.”

So, where are YOU in the process?

You’ve got an agent, now what?

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So it happened – a real, live agent read my manuscript, called me, and wanted to represent me! Cray-Cray, I know. I signed the contract and waited patiently for my letter, you know, the one where she tells me what she thinks needs to change? I’m lucky – it was only 7 pages long. She gave me some great advice on each and every character, and pointed out some things that were a bit confusing. Now I’ve actually started the revision process. I’m giving myself three months to finish.

Three months. I’m hoping that I’ll be finished before that, but I don’t want it to appear that I just rushed through it. Agent Awesome said if I hadn’t sent anything in SIX months, we’d need to talk. And by “need to talk”, I’m pretty sure she means a beat-down.

All good agents find a way to inspire you.

Now, go write!

 

Inside an Agent’s Head

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I haven’t actually met my agent, or HEARD from her, since I mailed the contract off a couple of weeks ago. I’m sure she hasn’t changed her mind. Seriously, like that would ever happen. Like that would ever happen? Would that ever happen?

Whatever. I’m sure once we begin to communicate, we’ll get along like gangbusters. I have no idea HOW gangbusters get along, but they sound really violent. Perhaps I should rephrase. Anyway, the point is – if you want to know what agents think and do then go here -

PUB RANTS

It’s not MY soon-to-be-agent’s head, but it’s still a good place to start.

Write On!

My Query Advice

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There are websites FULL of advice on how to write the perfect query, written by people far more qualified than I. They were a big help to me while writing MY query. My advice is for what you should do AFTER you’ve got your query perfected. While I’m not a famous, published author, my query DID land me an agent, so take it for what it’s worth.

Here it is – FOLLOW THE RULES.

I know that sounds like a big, “duh”, but I can’t tell you how many agencies complain about authors disregarding the submission guidelines and just hitting the “SEND” button. When I began sending out my query, my goal was to do 10 each week. That may not seem like a lot, but since every agent want’s something different – it was very time consuming. If an agency wanted the first 10 pages, they got the first ten pages and no more, no less. If they were looking for Young Adult novels with a dark edge, I DIDN’T send a query, since mine is not that at all. Seriously, why waste their time AND mine?

Occasionally, when I was in too good of a mood to be depressed, I’d check out http://arcaedia.livejournal.com/ She posts weekly stats on how many queries she’s received and how many manuscripts she’s requested. Last week it was 203 read, ONE manuscript requested. Probably half of the queries she read could be discounted immediately for NOT following her submission guidelines or being outside the scope of what she was looking for.

Do your work, and follow the rules. It will speed up the process and you’ll find an agent before you know it!

Write ON!

Good News/Bad News

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The agent responded to MY response, (if agents don’t understand the need to drink, no one does) with another nice email. She encouraged me to revise carefully and get in touch with her again. It’s great to have an opening with an agent, for SURE. and she also gave me a more detailed critique. The first email suggested changes which could be dealt with pretty easily, while this one mentioned losing one of the characters. Much tougher to do.

At my last writer’s conference, our keynote speaker was an author named Evelyn Coleman. She was GREAT, but she told us that once she’s completed a novel, she DELETES it and STARTS OVER. Did I mention she’s crazy? Or so I thought….

Oh well, at least I know what I’ll be doing for the next few months –  revising, revising, and revising. And by revising, I mean drinking. But you knew that already.